HomePortalFAQSearchRegisterMemberlistUsergroupsLog in

Share | 
 

 Track : Fire

Go down 
AuthorMessage
Mou$ie
Fresh Meat
avatar

Male Number of posts : 23
Age : 29
Location : Coventry
Registration date : 2007-04-27

PostSubject: Track : Fire   Thu May 17, 2007 2:03 am

Featuring Dan-W, Ricta Idyllic And Myself...again Another college track, pretty dope though this is for the mixtape of dan-W comin out soon so check that ish


http://www.soundclick.com/bands/songInfo.cfm?bandID=506899&songID=5338397


Crit it mannn......


Uppin...
Back to top Go down
View user profile http://www.myspace.com/mousieuk
Infared
Some Props
avatar

Male Number of posts : 112
Location : Birkenhead, UK
Registration date : 2007-05-09

PostSubject: Re: Track : Fire   Thu May 17, 2007 7:12 pm

Nice choice on beat.. Love that shadowville beat :]


Anyway, i'ma just criticise on your part..

You could have spat some punches..
Flow is pretty nice.. & I like the rhyme scheme you used..
Delivery was decent, was better than the other tracks delivery, so nice 1.
I don't like the hook though.

Keep it up though, `1.

_________________




www.myspace.com/infaredk


www.soundclick.com/infaredk


Infared
Back to top Go down
View user profile
Stanzah
aka Tha Fuz
avatar

Male Number of posts : 204
Location : United Kingdom, OX16
Registration date : 2007-04-27

PostSubject: Re: Track : Fire   Fri May 18, 2007 8:19 pm

Much better than the last drop! everyone was deffo better, more energy

_________________
.:Tha Fuz aka Verze Almighty:.
My Music - www.myspace.com/itsthafuz
My Instrumentals - www.soundclick.com/thafuz
My Crew - www.myspace.com/riskiebusiness
Back to top Go down
View user profile http://www.myspace.com/itsthafuz
J7
Fresh Meat
avatar

Male Number of posts : 23
Age : 30
Location : burnley
Registration date : 2007-05-28

PostSubject: Re: Track : Fire   Mon May 28, 2007 10:10 pm

yea like it man keep em cumin
Back to top Go down
View user profile http://J4y2007.bebo.com
Sponsored content




PostSubject: Re: Track : Fire   

Back to top Go down
 
Track : Fire
Back to top 
Page 1 of 1
 Similar topics
-
» Fridays Cry-Love is a Fire
» Saxon Studio International Coughing Up Fire 1984
» Day Of Fire.
» Easter Bash 2k5 ( Fire Links vz Black Kat )
» This Fire Embrace.

Permissions in this forum:You cannot reply to topics in this forum
 :: Battle Grounds :: Audio Battles & Showcase-
Jump to: