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Mou$ie
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Mou$ie


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PostSubject: Track : Fire   Track : Fire Icon_minitimeThu May 17, 2007 2:03 am
Featuring Dan-W, Ricta Idyllic And Myself...again Another college track, pretty dope though this is for the mixtape of dan-W comin out soon so check that ish


http://www.soundclick.com/bands/songInfo.cfm?bandID=506899&songID=5338397


Crit it mannn......


Uppin...
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PostSubject: Re: Track : Fire   Track : Fire Icon_minitimeThu May 17, 2007 7:12 pm
Nice choice on beat.. Love that shadowville beat :]


Anyway, i'ma just criticise on your part..

You could have spat some punches..
Flow is pretty nice.. & I like the rhyme scheme you used..
Delivery was decent, was better than the other tracks delivery, so nice 1.
I don't like the hook though.

Keep it up though, `1.
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PostSubject: Re: Track : Fire   Track : Fire Icon_minitimeFri May 18, 2007 8:19 pm
Much better than the last drop! everyone was deffo better, more energy
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PostSubject: Re: Track : Fire   Track : Fire Icon_minitimeMon May 28, 2007 10:10 pm
yea like it man keep em cumin
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