Voice

yo wats hapenin man i jus wana knw if ya need a certain type of voice to rap or for it to sound good like does it mata wat accent ya got dnt knw if i posted it in rite place or not

yes, maybe the wrong section. voice depends on the listener, some people will critizise you for your voice, others will enjoy. depends on what you can actually do with it.

let us hear.

im nt gud enuf 2 do songs yet the verses all sound same different lyrics bt same bad sound av ya gt any advice

Don't change your voice, people will respect you more if you keep it real.

yea thnx but i dnt mean change ma voice its just the way the verse sounds its hard 2 explain, its like borin wen i spit a verse but wen i listen to other peoples they got like a rythem o sumit to there verse en every single bar tht i spit is sounds the same but with different lyrics

I hope you don't spit the way your type

no nuthin like it y

Hard to understand.

ok sorry i was just trying to type fast coz i was in a rush

have you just started spittin??

i think what you may be thinking about is delivery...and how you interpret with the expression on your voice.

Accents arnt a problem, these days you can get away with sounding like borat, ey kane?

yea kind of iv bin writin 4 awhile but iv decided to start makin songs en i think it is the delivery but im not sure wat ya mean bout the otha fing

Stanzah wrote:

Accents arnt a problem, these days you can get away with sounding like borat, ey kane?

Haha, thats your homie your dissing.


Yeah, you're defently talking about delivery man, basically just dont talk, rap, but dont force it

If you get me.

i knw not to talk en tht i do rap its jus the way i say ma bars theres no like rythem to them its proper hard to explain lol

ha-ha, you mean riding the beat.
you sound like your just talking loudly over a beat?...that's the rhythm of your flow.

add me on msn and i will try and help over the mic.

Chapter wrote:

Stanzah wrote:

Accents arnt a problem, these days you can get away with sounding like borat, ey kane?

Haha, thats your homie your dissing.

Not my homie, homie

Never spoke to that dude once in my life

aahh man its well hard to explain im not jus talkin loudly lol it could be tht expression of voice fing wats it mean

ok, if your read and speak your lyrics ike your speaking to someone, theres gonna be places in your lil speech that you need to have more impact...or you'll say in a sarcastic tone.
Like, have you seen the jumpoff battles? some of the lines wouldnt be as funny if they were just said in monotone.

I think thats basically what you may be missing

yea man tht could be it ill check them battles en c wat ya mean cheers

when im writin ma rhymes i find it propa hard to cum up wi metaphors and multi rhymes is this sumit ill get beta at with practice.

Yeah, text battling helped me grasp meta's and muties.

just sit and write multi's in a note book.
metaphor/wordplay isn't going to come unless you start battling, using nameplay and fuck around with flips.

call dudes out.

thnanks 4 advice

i aim to get high like i was smokin-the-green,
im folowin rap like im stalkin-ma-dreams,
forget avin crews i dont walk-with-a-team,
im not sittin round en just hopin-for-dreams,
im standin up boy en im runin-for-these,
you get crushed like a fat chick wid kinks-in-her-knees,
dont battle me coz ill be kickin-these-G's,
then wen i beat ya im buzzin like bee's.

can ya let me knw if these bars are any gud en wat i can do to improve thanks

hmm, doubt this would flow to well on audio. if your aiming for audio, make sure you write your lyrics whilst listening to the beat.

some of the multis don't flow to well, or even rhyme, put more energy and soul into your writtens, feel the beat your listening to. grasp the beat before you even begin writing.

smoking / stalking ?
Kicking / Buzzing ?

think about it pal. try again.

i dont knw how to mek the words flow really im not even sure wat it means