On the Run

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/songInfo.cfm?bandID=506899&songID=5297969

Track fearuring a few college people. nothin special just a nice lil track, the last emcee its his first ever verse so dont judge to harshly! anyways give some feed

PEACE!

Like this beat!
First guy comes quite sick, rides the beat well, if you listen closely you can hear him sounding abit uncomfortable
Second Guy im guessing your mousie? it was ok..nothing special..didnt stand out too much man, flow especially for quite a big collab like this will make you stand out more
Third guy, have a gd rap voice (no homo) like his delivery didnt like the convo rhyme type scheme must admit, didnt work for me
Fourth guy is ok, nothing special with flow pattern.
Last guy, sounds like hes reading

The singing was unexpected

OK track overall..needs work..not horrible thought

yeah seen thanks for the feed mamn, ill be gettin more ish up soon anyways cause we done a few more tracks as a group, that by far exceed this one we ust did it cause our mate made the beat so we wanted to use it quickly you see......thanks for the feed...any1 else?? uppin

No one has very good mic presence. None of you sound comfortable on the mic and the delivery isn't anything special. Wouldn't say anyone put any real emotion into it.

Most flowed to the beat decently it's just nothing stood out. When there's so many in a collab you should be trying to outshine each other. No one seemed up for it.

Salam

It's a nice beat.
Delivery from everyone isn't hard.
Mic presence is meh.
Mousie, your flow is off on some bars.

Third person on it probably has the best verse.

Anyway.
Keep it up anyway, no hate, just my opinion.

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Cheers for the crits, it was nothin long as ive sed, ill put suttin nu up anyways this is old now, got a new dope track called Fireee....so peep dat thread!