London State Of Mind W/ Loonatic [Produced By Krazi Flash]

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/songInfo.cfm?bandID=660725&songID=5226563

I'm on 1st and 3rd verse. My friend on 2nd and 4th. It's his first recording.

Salam

So im listenin......

1st dude...yourself.....flow is poor, delivery aint there either, theres a message but the way you've come on it it has no kinda flow or rythm....and if the second persons first time recordin hes gunna me berkin soon, hes got a niceish flow, and his delivery is better than yourself.....hes barrs are nice aswell man....i understand the concept, i just didnt enjoy the song atalll, for a nice beat you didnt make the most of it....

The 1st verse was reworded and rushed that's why it's not so good. It was almost double the length but i didn't like the way it sounded and he was rushing me to finish the track off so i just did it quickly.

I think both our 2nd verses are better. Thanks for the feedback anyway.

Salam